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River of Your Eyes

river of your dreamy eyes flows gently, yet slithering away from me, downstream-- where I am caught in a wave of pain, tears! Posted for PD's Contest Three liner poem or 3 monoku 17th Feb 1016

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Date: 2/21/2016 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Rhoma..
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:07:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Rhoma! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:26:00 AM
Congrats for your win. I enjoyed the likening of water to tears.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:13:00 AM
Rhoma, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:43:00 AM
RHOMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem! Best of luck!
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