River of Your Eyes

river of your dreamy eyes flows gently, 
yet slithering away from me, downstream--
where I am caught in a wave of pain,  tears! 


Posted for PD's Contest
Three liner poem or 3 monoku
17th Feb 1016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:49 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Rhoma..
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:07 PM
BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Rhoma! Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Congrats for your win. I enjoyed the likening of water to tears.
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February 21, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Rhoma, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:43 AM
RHOMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Heemstra Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 6:43 PM
Beautiful poem! Best of luck!
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