Sneha Rv Poet Sijo

River of Dreams

A river of dreams courses the mind,   cresting and flowing                                                                                                          
 Long lost memories  swirl in her midst ~  nostalgic wishes 
Swept by wonder's tides, we are carried from   reality's shore.

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Sara Kendrick February 6, 2024 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your winner in the Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2024 at 1:22 PM I am so pleased to see that you already received a trophy on this one in the past. And I see I commented on it years ago. If you go see my blog, you will understand why you did not place in top three. It was simply for being one syllable off according to the rules i gave. Truly a magnificent sijo. Congrats.

Susan Ashley January 8, 2018 at 8:32 PM Outstanding monoku Sneha. Beautiful imagery gracefully overflows from your lovely and imaginative write. Belated congratulations on your trophy win! Warmest wishes ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux December 27, 2017 at 9:50 AM I can see why these were chosen to be honoured. Congrats on your win. I have enjoyed reading your words this morning.

River Dreams December 14, 2017 at 1:48 AM very nicely put together,its so crazy to find your poem when i have one along the same meaning of life; almost creepy so similar in meaning and title its seems like an illusion of coincidence

Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2017 at 4:49 PM So many things swirling within the dreams! Congrats on a top win!!

Sandra Haight December 9, 2017 at 3:44 PM Beautifully written, Sneha! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Kelly Deschler March 22, 2016 at 8:36 PM It is nice to let our dreams carry us away, even for just a little while... This is a lovely poem, Sneha. I enjoyed it! Nicely written! :) Sneha Rv March 25, 2016 at 3:06 AM Thank you so much, dear Kelly!! Really glad you like it!! :) :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 10:43 PM And back again with big congrats dear sneha on ur big win. Sneha Rv March 25, 2016 at 3:07 AM Thank you so much!! :) :)

Paul Callus February 21, 2016 at 2:18 PM I'm back with another round of applause, Sneha! Congratulations on your lovely and merited win! ~ Regards // paul Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 2:28 PM I really appreciate your encouragement.. Thanks a lot!! :D :D

Eve Roper February 21, 2016 at 1:35 PM Sneha, congratulations on your win!!! Great write! Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 2:28 PM Thank you!! :D :D

Bl Devnath February 21, 2016 at 1:31 PM Congrats my lovely friend for winning in the contest with this beautiful poem, bl Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 2:29 PM Thanks you so much!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2016 at 10:22 AM Congrats, you are a winner!! I recall this as one of the best of the river poems. Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 10:23 AM Oh!! Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! Yours was marvellous!! :D :D

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:11 AM Sneha, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 10:19 AM Thanks a lot for my placement, dear Linda!! I loved your contest!! :D :D

Sandra Haight February 21, 2016 at 9:53 AM So beautiful, Sneha. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra Sneha Rv February 21, 2016 at 9:58 AM Thank you so much, dear Sandra!! Yours was amazing!! I loved it!! :D :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 19, 2016 at 1:48 AM Wonderful monokus Sneha... great work.. best wishes! Sneha Rv February 19, 2016 at 2:10 PM Thanks a lot, Dr.!! :D :D

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2016 at 6:44 PM carried away from reality's shores. Wow. I love that, Sneha. Sneha Rv February 19, 2016 at 2:10 PM Thank you so much, dear Andrea!! :D :D

Paul Callus February 18, 2016 at 3:13 PM Well done, Sneha!!! A round of applause for these 3 lovely monoku. I like your river of dreams that meanders among the emotions of the soul, nostalgia and imagination. gl in the contest. // paul Sneha Rv February 19, 2016 at 2:14 PM Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! Pleased you like it!! :D :D

Nette Onclaud February 18, 2016 at 12:58 PM lovely melody, sneva..it just flows.. huggs Sneha Rv February 19, 2016 at 2:12 PM Thanks a lot, dear Nette!! :D :D

Tim Smith February 18, 2016 at 12:49 PM Tremendous piece Sneha....one of the tops I have seen....good luck Sneha Rv February 19, 2016 at 2:12 PM Thank you so much!! :D :D