River of Dreams

A River of dreams runs through my mind.
It's slow moving water carries me deep.
I find the person that I want to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend, bl
Vandenbosch Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Love it!
A. Sharma Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Allison..
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:24 PM
BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Allison! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations! Excellent.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:32 AM
oh, I quite like this one. Congrats in the contest.
Schumacher Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thank you!!
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Allison, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:01 AM
This is really good! Good luck in contest.
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