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River Ocean Delta Make Love

River Ocean Delta Make Love – Haiku River meets ocean Mouth of delta opens wide They kiss, merge liquids

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2014 3:01:00 AM

wow love the personification - fabulous write! hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/4/2014 4:07:00 AM

Good morning Jan, I hope everything is good with you. Thank you so much and I am glad that you enjoyed it. This haiku, though small, shows a very large love with a lot of action. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/3/2014 7:42:00 PM

Twisting, yeah haha

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/3/2014 8:00:00 PM

Hi Toquyen, It is nice to hear from you. Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great day. Take care. Earl