River Ocean Delta Make Love

River Ocean Delta Make Love – Haiku

River meets ocean
Mouth of delta opens wide
They kiss, merge liquids
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:01 AM
wow love the personification - fabulous write! hugs jan xx
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November 4, 2014 at 4:07 AM
Good morning Jan, I hope everything is good with you. Thank you so much and I am glad that you enjoyed it. This haiku, though small, shows a very large love with a lot of action. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl
Harrell Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Twisting, yeah haha
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November 3, 2014 at 8:00 PM
Hi Toquyen, It is nice to hear from you. Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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