River, Moon, Giants

River, Moon, Giants

Old wood, river banks 
Saturated with moon, spills
Trees grow giant, shade 

    Created on 8/27/14 for One Solo Epic Haiku – River Walk contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 21, 2015 at 5:11 PM
EARL:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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September 11, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Lol. At first I thought I would see giants crossing a river with a giant boat! Applause to your win Earl! :-)
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September 11, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Good morning Teddy, I appreciate your interest here. I'm glad you enjoyed it and got something out of it. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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September 7, 2014 at 4:24 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" Earl - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 7, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Good morning Anne Lise, Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. Congratulations to you too for your solid, thought provoking poem and win. Have a great week end. Take care. Earl
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September 6, 2014 at 11:01 PM
this one has atmosphere! Congrats for your win.
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September 7, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Hi Andrea, I hope all is well with you. Thank you so much, I'm happy that you enjoyed the atmosphere. It appears to be a lower one. I understand there is air there so its alright. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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September 6, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations Earl. Lovely Haiku.
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September 6, 2014 at 3:14 PM
Hi Brenda. Thank you so much. I appreciate your commenting. Have a great weekend. Take care. Earl
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September 6, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Congratulations, Earl on a fine win! Excellent Haiku. Pandita
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September 6, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Hi Pandita, Thank you so much. I am deeply appreciative. Take care. Earl
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September 6, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations, Earl on a fine win! Excellent Haiku. Pandita
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 7:12 AM
beautiful take on the theme many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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September 6, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Hi Jan. Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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September 5, 2014 at 11:25 PM
Earl, . Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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September 6, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you so much. I love the smiles but I get confused easily. Should I turn my lap top on its side or should I turn my head to the side for best viewing pleasure? I'm sure I'll figure it out. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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August 28, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Apt take on the river walk, Earl
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August 28, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. Enjoy the day. Earl
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August 27, 2014 at 4:25 PM
this paints a beautiful picture! Love those giants.
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August 27, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Hi Andrea, I hope you are having a nice evening. Thank you for commenting. Yes. Haiku is too small so I have to make the images gigantic. We can blame it on the moon too. It makes the trees larger than life. Have a nice night. Take Care. Earl
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