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River Line Tourist

RIVER LINE TOURIST National Geographic frame: pleasure of plum water lilies, under potent panama sky. A dugout canoe rows us through. Embera with beaded skirt, our rudder. Caiman perched on edge of Chagris River. 2/25/2017 River Line 8/8/8/8 10/10 Unrhymed

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Date: 2/27/2017 9:06:00 AM
Great creative imagery; can picture the caiman on the riverbank! Enjoyed!~Che :) PS G/L in the contest!:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Cheryl!
Date: 2/25/2017 5:12:00 PM
Nice, Kim - a concentrated blast of exoticism.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thanks, Doug :)

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