Anisha Dutta Poet Verse

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11/12/16

Fifth Place 

River Livne Contest

River Line

RIVER LINE

              Dream of rigid stubborn mountain melts in cheerful fountain.
           Free Fall broke in brook and shook pebbles making way in stream.
           River line flows zig-zag with little brittle ripples dancing.
            River runs nurturing flora-fauna, habitats, strands,
            enriching soil of banks with alluvial deposits.

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Kai Michael Neumann November 28, 2016 at 1:05 AM Alluvion and strength. Beautiful. Congratulations, Kai

Janis Medders Tobechi November 27, 2016 at 10:40 PM Great imagery in your write. Congratulations.

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2016 at 6:59 PM Little brittle ripples dancing - a great line. Congrats, Anisha!

Sandra Haight November 27, 2016 at 6:34 PM Beautiful imagery, Anisha. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Tamal Kundu November 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM The poem flows smooth as a river! Good luck in the contest, Anisha!