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River Line

RIVER LINE Dream of rigid stubborn mountain melts in cheerful fountain. Free Fall broke in brook and shook pebbles making way in stream. River line flows zig-zag with little brittle ripples dancing. River runs nurturing flora-fauna, habitats, strands, enriching soil of banks with alluvial deposits. 11/22/16 Form: River Line Contest by Rick Parise Fifth Place

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Date: 11/28/2016 1:05:00 AM
Alluvion and strength. Beautiful. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 11/27/2016 10:40:00 PM
Great imagery in your write. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/27/2016 6:59:00 PM
Little brittle ripples dancing - a great line. Congrats, Anisha!
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Date: 11/27/2016 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Anisha. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/26/2016 12:23:00 AM
The poem flows smooth as a river! Good luck in the contest, Anisha!
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