River Line
It was a large spin eddy swirling just aside the banks
that still allowed the river to flow unrestrained and free.
Bobby Hill and me had run away that day tired of rules
stifling us being polywogs splashing til chill set in
we gave in, sure they would miss us so we went home again.
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five line River Line
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