River Line

Splashing in invigorating beads of perspiration
Blasphemous pouting over grievances, neigh retirement
Itchy foaming kiss, yoked in tumult, dispersed in action 
Catapulting inertia when ravishing tarry
While drenched, unquenched thirst raves belly of aqua's mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 8:01 AM
A profound metaphoric verse,Samiha. My compliments!
Callus Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Hi Samiha! I read and commented on this poem about 4 days ago, but looks like I have nothing to show for it!! I like your metaphorical take on the expressive 'aqua' effect of this 'river'...very creative! #7+ Wishing you all the best as the year nears its end...hoping that 2017 will bring you love, health, peace and contentment. Warm regards // paul
Zubair Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Hello Paul, how are you. I read your comment its even published for a blog. Your well of reflections is a shining star for any amateur.
Neumann Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Autobiographical? 'Aqua's mine', so meaningful. Congratulations, Kai
Zubair Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Drive for thirst is more when you are soaked. Thanks.
Kundu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 7:00 PM
Great poem. Congrats, Samiha!
Zubair Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Thanks for riding with me on the waves. Have fun
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:53 PM
River in action with many emotions! Congrats, Samiha!
Zubair Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Thanks. Keep in touch.
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