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River Life and Beauty

ivy purrs as wind's tendrils weave 
chorus frogs and other wildlife 
Monet flowering lilies run
pulling on nature's essence strings


leaves strewed received aspire pilgrimage 
down rivers freely flow; sunshine bestowed

2/28/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Singh Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:14 AM
This is beautifully crafted. GL for the contest!
Meade Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Your words paint a wonderful picture -- color and texture mix to bring delight to the heart!! Well done Eve
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Thank you ,David, you are so very kind .. A painting I enjoy doing with the pen.
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:47 AM
picturesque in every way, eve.. wow.. huggs
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 11:14 PM
Thank you ,Nette.. your so sweet Hugs
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 8:15 AM
A 7 for this lovely piece, Eve. Janice
Trifiatis Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 2:18 AM
A river of poetic beauty dear, Eve! A seven
Sathasivam Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 1:01 AM
Excellent. Well penned. All the best for the contest.
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 1:39 PM
- Beautiful poem, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:35 AM
Charming ...
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 11:10 PM
So so wonderful Eve! Loved this!
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:59 PM
You make Oscar proud Eve, fine work...
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:58 PM
You made my day, Charlie ~* Hugs Eve
Green Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Absolutely beautiful Eve and Monet is one of my favorites if not my favorite. And now your poem is the perfect companion piece to this wondrous artwork. I am floored by the beauty of your poem.
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:59 PM
Thank you,Chris, he is also one of my fav. you're inspirational compliment ~* Hugs Eve
Vinson Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Hypnotically good, Eve. : )
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Thank you so much for your kind compliment ~* Hugs Eve
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