River In the Sky

I raced outside to the rivers flow,
That illuminated the ground below.
At first the colors were soft and slow,
With Danali's peaks in the full moon glow.

Then an eerie flood of pastel rays,
Swirled through the sky like a tidal wave.
The electrifying pulse hit home,
Where a soul will never feel alone.
On my knees I began to pray,
To the angels as they dance and sway.
My heart soared high in the atmosphere.
I shouted, God, I'm glad you're here.
Reaching high for streams of light.
My heart took wings and joined the flight.
No longer bound to the likes of earth.
I sprang from the womb of celestial birth.

The wings of hope enfolded me;
Like an instrument in a symphony.
I swear the sound was heavenly.
As I joined in natures ecstasy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2023 2:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/18/2016 9:57:00 PM
It takes some talent to so eloquently convey such an amazing celestial experience, both naturally and spiritually. I appreciate its transcendental allure. Excellent work!!
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Robert Nehls
Date: 5/20/2016 4:34:00 AM
Hi Jeannie. Thanks so much for stopping by and reading this one. I appreciate your kind comments. I lived in Alaska for 5 years and saw some beautiful sights but I think the northern lights were the greatest gift off all. Have a beautiful day, my friend..... Robert.
Date: 7/22/2014 11:32:00 PM
Robert You descriptive and illustrative words moves the readers heart and soul with the passion you have for nature and its surroundings. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Tough Love poem.
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/23/2014 6:23:00 AM
Thanks, Robin. This was truly a heartfelt poem. My wife and I lived in Alaska for 5 years and the Northern Lights were so beautiful. I really believed that they brought me closer to the realization of the God within me. Your comments are always welcome, my friend.... Robert.
Date: 7/17/2014 9:45:00 PM
Nature proves God's perfection. Fallen man only sees a tiny part of it all. Brilliant write my friend!!!!
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:49:00 AM
So true, Robert. I am grateful for the opportunity to see all that I can. I think the northern lights are the closest I have come to seeing God's perfection. I could stand outside in my bath robe mesmerized until I realized that frostbite may be setting in. A beautiful sight, my friend.... Robert.
Date: 7/16/2014 9:27:00 AM
A natural essence of God's presence. Stay connected my friend. I wrote one like this called Moonsignor. You might check it out some time. Peace. :)
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/17/2014 6:56:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comment, Robert. I will take a look at your poetry......Robert.
Date: 7/14/2014 9:00:00 AM
Hi Robert: A beautiful poem personifying nature to a large extent. My compliments.
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Date: 7/15/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Ralph. Alaska was certainly full of God's wonders. For me the northern lights were the greatest of them all. It was truly a blessing to be part of it... Robert.
Date: 7/13/2014 7:41:00 AM
Wow, I'm going to read all your postings. You Sir are a poet's Poet
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/13/2014 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jerry. You are very kind. You have given me a great compliment and I take that to heart, my friend.... Robert.
Date: 7/13/2014 12:24:00 AM
wow, I am glad I came back here and saw what you said about this musician friend of John Denver. how Awesome!!! gosh, do you think you could get them sung by someone famous? Sure wish I had some connections in the music world!!
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/13/2014 11:30:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I'm not sure what's going to happen but I sure look forward to it. Should be fun and a great opportunity. Luv.... Robert.
Date: 7/12/2014 10:31:00 AM
I love nature, too... and I really love God. Thanks for the poem and happy writing. It's nice to meet you!!! God bless you.
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/13/2014 11:25:00 AM
Very nice to meet you too, Regina. Thanks for stopping by and I will read some of your poems soon. I'm glad you liked this one.... Robert.
Date: 7/12/2014 9:07:00 AM
The wings of hope enfolded me; Like an instrument in a symphony. I swear the sound was heavenly. As I joined in natures ecstasy. I especially liked this part..Hope does enfold us..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/13/2014 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. I look forward to your comments, my friend. I'm so happy you liked this one. After living in Alaska for 5 years I have seen some beautiful skies. Thanks again, Sara..... Robert.
Date: 7/10/2014 8:56:00 PM
wow, you were really getting high on nature. It reminds me of the documentary I showed my class today on the life of John Denver, whose great love affair was with the natural world. VERY well done describing this celestial event!!
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Date: 7/11/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, Andrea. I've always loved John Denver and I will have the opportunity, very soon, to write some songs with the man who was the lead guitarist in John Denver's band. I am looking forward to being around someone that was so close to John. Your friend, Robert.
Date: 7/9/2014 7:31:00 PM
Robert, this is a beautiful poem...flows so nicely and is a pleasure to read. How are you doing, my friend?
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/10/2014 4:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Faye. your words are always refreshing. I am doing fine, my friend. Each day is truly more beautiful than the one before it. Happy with each day that comes.... Robert.
Date: 7/9/2014 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful! was a pleasure to read this my friend :)
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/10/2014 3:56:00 AM
thank you, Casarah. So happy you liked it, my friend.... Robert.
Date: 7/9/2014 4:14:00 PM
Beautifully written Robert... I chose now as a favorite. Verlena :0))s.
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Robert Nehls
Date: 7/10/2014 3:55:00 AM
Thank you, Verlena. I glad you chose it as a favorite. That makes me very happy. Your comments are very welcome, my friend.... Robert.
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