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River Grouper

River Grouper Old river Codfish hit the bay, in sunny South Australia. He said "that’s odd", "It’s salty Cod", "I’m seasick, not heart failure". The boat came by, they stared a bit. Say’s “Nah I’m not a Grouper”, "Don’t want no hook", "Don’t eat no Chook", "Not now, I’m just a feeling crook", "Piddle off now, no hoper"! for Carolyn's "Attack" contest

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Date: 5/24/2011 6:54:00 PM
I sure like the "sound" of your slang words in your little poems, Don. wEll, listen. I went to your utube thing. I can't figure out my volume control Sometimes I go to places and the volume is really good. So I don't know if it's my computer or your video, but it was hard for me to hear it and add in your accent, I really don't know what you were talking about. hahaha. Sorry, Anyway, it was nice to see a face to go with your name. You are somewhat how I imagined you! Very Australian!!
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Don. The best to you in Carolyn's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:33:00 PM
nice I like it good luck in the contest. cory
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