River Behaviour
Rusty colours
Immature eddies
Various swirls by meeting the shallows
Easy life for birds – paddling and schmoozing
Robust banks discipline the flow
Rapid somewhat move through the narrows
Under river fish playing with the water
Naughty fish playing!
Shallow deposits
Steady talking water
Timid waves throw floating leaves
Energetic dog puts splashy paw prints
Along the smoother bank
Diving dipping bird: it has dived to fish
Young river to grand river
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Rumblings
Irritable eddies
Violent swirling
Eager fish only challenge it
Rapids
Raving bank smashes
Unprovoked now provoked
Nasty river messages
Surprising depth
Water rush
Ill tempered negotiating
Living a struggle
Deaths
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