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River Ballet

RIVER BALLET
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                    ballet of riversong sashays
whirling choral chimes with dusk’s bouquets


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  John Freeman’s Crystalline Euphony

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2011 9:41:00 PM

I see by the comments that you grabbed a high win with this one Nette ...and I can certainly see why... Makes me feel like dancing @@@ :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 7:03:00 PM

Contratulations on the win in the contest,nette

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/6/2011 6:47:00 PM

congrats on a shared 2nd place win nette! beautiful words and images...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 9/6/2011 4:59:00 AM

Very eloquently expressed. The flow of water is very poetic in its own right. xoxo Robert.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/5/2011 11:00:00 PM

lovely words, beautifully put, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2011 10:59:00 PM

VERY VERY pretty. and I see congrats are in order!! thanks for your greeting today, Nette.Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2011 7:08:00 PM

Creative winning work..Sara

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/5/2011 6:53:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win,Nette.Continue in your quest.....

Jack Horne

Date: 9/5/2011 4:04:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : ) Thanks - enjoyed your contest, as always

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2011 2:46:00 PM

A lovely image, Nette. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 9/5/2011 10:08:00 AM

Hey Nette congratulations on your big win...hurrrray!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/5/2011 7:35:00 AM

Very good write and win for you!!! Congrats my dear Poet friend!! Luv Michael

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2011 7:10:00 AM

hey there Nette, congratulations on your win in John's contest ;) *hugs*

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/5/2011 5:00:00 AM

Well done with this wonderful work. It ring a bit different from most I have read so far. Congrats Marg..

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:14:00 AM

hey Nette congrats on your win, really liked this one..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 2:57:00 AM

Congrats Nette luv on your second place win with this brilliant and rare beauty poetry my friend.. amazing words compliment this theme..so well luv..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 1:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the Crystalline Euphony Contest by John Freeman. CR

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 12:55:00 AM

Nette, Beautiful Job Ballerina, Smile. Thanks...Congratulations on your worthy second place. Agape, Moses

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/4/2011 6:06:00 PM

Intriguing title...good luck as John judges. CR

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/4/2011 3:42:00 PM

well very beautiful lines Nette luv and such eloquent visuals too..good luck in the contest.. a breathtaking beauty winner ..sweetie..luv..

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/4/2011 1:32:00 PM

How beautiful! Enjoyed reading this poem! Good Luck in the contest! ---Lori

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/4/2011 12:23:00 PM

As you could picture my poem in your mind, I too can visualize your poem within mine! And it's a glorious one at that! I enjoyed this poem immensely Nette! Thank you for sharing this write with all of us! Truly wonderful!! You should do awesome in the contest!!