Riven

I’m trying to be positive
But deep inside my gut
A chorus filled with “not again!”
Is there to undercut.

I check the undecideds
As the numbers fluctuate
And know there’s nothing we can do
Except to sit and wait.

The country’s riven clean in half,
The red states and the blue.
We aren’t the United States,
For unity’s taboo.

We’re holding our collective breath
And clinging to our hope
That when the votes are tallied up,
The losing half can cope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:43 PM
i do hope for that day we can be united again, ilene. 'holding our collective breath'... beautifully stated.
Leffanta Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 12:00 PM
It really does not matter who wins now that the whole world know 50% of Americans wholly support kidnapping children from their parents and hanging them in cages, lying, cheating, stealing, packing the courts to deny justice, etc. The reputation of the USA has been destroyed. I have advised my daugher to return to Wales so my granddaughter may be raised among people with a much higher standard of conduct! Congrats on the poem! Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 5:01 AM
This is EXCELLENT in all respects, Ilene. As a prime example of the chaos, BOTH men were claiming to have won yesterday--with millions of votes uncounted! Actually it was the Biden campaign people saying that. Janice
Borke Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 4:56 PM
If Trump loses now, we’d need him back in 2024 to fix up the mess
Wolf Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 3:55 PM
So important to unite behind the victor, whoever that is. I'm a Republican -- couldn't stand either Reagan or Trump, but that's another story -- yet I'd be happy to unite behind Joe, and support him as the President of the USA. Too many people play 'sour grapes' now... Best to congratulate the victor, bump elbows (lol), and get on with life! ~ Man doth not live by politics alone!!! :) gw
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Only time will tell.. but looks like Biden is ahead at the moment and trumpty throwing his dummy out of the cot , have got a few lims to post on the subject:-( hugs jan xx
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