Rivalry's Children

It was the time when art was king,
Of artists whose praises  we all sing.
Great minds there were in the Renaissance,
Through eons , unsurpassed, with little advance.

Greatness was embodied in the works of art,
In Lorenzo's gardens did Michelangelo start.
But great there was one of Mona Lisa fame,
Master painter, inventor - Leonardo his name.

Contemporaries for sure, one really wonders
Of the two, whose work steals the thunders.

David, the Pieta, Sistine Chapel, and more
Everlasting they are through ages sure.
But then there's the Lisa, Last Supper,  inventions galore.
On their ingenuity and genius, the world lays great store.

Can genius be bestowed in multiple men?
Can peace and tranquility be shared even then?
Can two kings sit and reign on one throne?
Or squabble and fight like two dogs with one bone?

And so, these men of unparallel fame
Were set by chance a mischievous game.
Asked they were to adorn the Council Hall
With paintings to settle rankings once and for all.

With gusto did the two set about
A Battle each to prove their clout.
Leonardo chose the battle of Anghiari;
Battle of Cascina was Michelangelo's quarry.

Great was the strife between the two,
Each strove hard for the other to outdo.
Of the rivalry ,I heard,   - the worst of all,
Art was the victim - and the two took a fall.

Relates the great chronicler Vasari,Giorgio,
That the nadir of art was seen in the Palazzo Vecchio
As each of the greats thought little of their craft
But dallied and diddled, till the populace all laughed.

The Cascina on naked bathing soldiers was based
On the banks of the Arno it was placed.
But  the scene that was  rendered was so ludicrous
That his work, sadly, bordered on the ridiculous.

Leonardo's Anghiari was a shade grim
But his chances to greatness was very slim.
He used oils from Pliny the Elder's recipe
But soon these flaked , were smudgy, and drippy.

Be that as it may
To Art's great dismay
What should have been great works
Were diminished by Rivalry's quirks.

Vasari  painted over these objets de art
And replaced these with his own from the start.
Now conservators do scan, to see if they can,
Which of the two, Leonardo or Michelangelo, was
The painter of the elusive Magnum Opus.

~18 Jun 2016~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gasun Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 4:53 AM
This is real superb! Big congrats on your win my dear friend, Karam! Thanks for sharing. Hugs and cheers!
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October 18, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Congrats love the rhyme you did this brilliantly well done x
Scars Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 7:22 AM
wonderful Karam! I'm very impressed :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Raynes Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Wow, this is mega interesting and full of info. Great write, definite winner for the contest
Misra Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 7:39 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Lewis. It was tough to write on this. Long time to think but once inspired, it came out quite fast. ~karam~
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