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(form 5-7-5 kawanagi) curiosity radioactivity femininity AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on March 12, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2018 6:23:00 PM

Love the title with this one. It's a shame we can't put titles on haiku for some contests because sometimes they are so cool to see!!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 7:08:00 PM

I know sometimes it's my favourite part of the haiku.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2018 12:49:00 PM

I relate to this from the male perspective, for sure. Very creatively expressed, Line...Now, does this work equally well from the female side? (Just wondering...)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 1:12:00 PM

O Gershon. It was meant from a male perspective. Women vary tremendously depending on age and experience. Thanks for your always entertaining visit and comment.