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Rising to the Challenge

My plant by the window is drooping; Don’t know if it’s thirsty or cold. In the mirror, my body is stooping, More obvious as I grow old. The radio needed replacing; The static was driving us nuts. The search for a couch I am facing Needs testing with hips, backs and butts. The snow that just fell was a dusting; The weathermen got this one right. To the new year I’m slowly adjusting, To survive our political plight. If we challenge ourselves with some rhyming In an ABAB type of verse, Then from out of despair we’ll start climbing; For uplifting, you can do much worse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 1/6/2025 8:14:00 PM
Schlumpf Bros. has a big sale on Slouches -- I mean Couches -- I hear.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/8/2025 1:22:00 PM
ha! i think i have to check them out, gershon! they must have a branch in new york...
Date: 1/6/2025 2:59:00 PM
Loved the way you wrote this,Ilene it made me laugh..a fabulous piece. Have a great new week my friend.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/8/2025 1:21:00 PM
much appreciated, zyrool! best wishes to you for a happy and poetic new year...
Date: 1/6/2025 2:36:00 PM
Leave it to a poetess like you to ring in the new year with these catchy phrases of wisdom, wit, intelligence and charm. You never cease to amaze, Ilene. Happy New Year!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/8/2025 1:20:00 PM
happy new year to you, too, terrell, and thank you for this lovely comment!
Date: 1/6/2025 2:05:00 PM
i love the "autoderision" , the poem is touching and nicely written, enjoyed yann
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/8/2025 1:20:00 PM
always so nice to hear from you, yann! thank you!
Date: 1/6/2025 2:01:00 PM
This is interesting - liked your sense of humor, made me laugh
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/8/2025 1:19:00 PM
thank you, paige! i'm so happy that the humor came through...

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