Rising to the Challenge

My plant by the window is drooping;
Don’t know if it’s thirsty or cold.
In the mirror, my body is stooping,
More obvious as I grow old.

The radio needed replacing;
The static was driving us nuts.
The search for a couch I am facing
Needs testing with hips, backs and butts.

The snow that just fell was a dusting;
The weathermen got this one right.
To the new year I’m slowly adjusting,
To survive our political plight.

If we challenge ourselves with some rhyming
In an ABAB type of verse,
Then from out of despair we’ll start climbing;
For uplifting, you can do much worse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Schlumpf Bros. has a big sale on Slouches -- I mean Couches -- I hear.
Bauer Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:22 PM
ha! i think i have to check them out, gershon! they must have a branch in new york...
Gifford Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 2:59 PM
Loved the way you wrote this,Ilene it made me laugh..a fabulous piece. Have a great new week my friend.
Bauer Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:21 PM
much appreciated, zyrool! best wishes to you for a happy and poetic new year...
Martin Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 2:36 PM
Leave it to a poetess like you to ring in the new year with these catchy phrases of wisdom, wit, intelligence and charm. You never cease to amaze, Ilene. Happy New Year!
Bauer Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:20 PM
happy new year to you, too, terrell, and thank you for this lovely comment!
Rolland Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 2:05 PM
i love the "autoderision" , the poem is touching and nicely written, enjoyed yann
Bauer Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:20 PM
always so nice to hear from you, yann! thank you!
Hind Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 2:01 PM
This is interesting - liked your sense of humor, made me laugh
Bauer Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 1:19 PM
thank you, paige! i'm so happy that the humor came through...
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