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Rising Beauty

a hive of evil rage ashes dissipating the rise of beauty! June 27th, 2018

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Date: 7/10/2018 11:13:00 AM
You speak with conviction, Besma, and that is because you know you are right! It is only when we get rid of negativity that the beauty of our being rises to the surface. ~ Best regards & blessings // paul
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Date: 7/11/2018 5:42:00 AM
Your visit I do appreciate Paul.. thank you so much for sparing so precious a time to read and comment my humble write! Your feedback is genuinely generous! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:18:00 AM
Yes, ashes must flee, then beauty arises! Lovely!
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Date: 7/11/2018 5:43:00 AM
My pleasure dear Kim! Uplifting feedback! Thank you so much. Stay blessed always.
Date: 7/4/2018 8:13:00 AM
- A beautiful haiku, Besma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/5/2018 6:11:00 AM
A great pleasure to have you on my page with your lovely and appreciative feedback. Thank you so much. Dear Anne-Lise stay blessed always.
Date: 7/3/2018 2:00:00 AM
Beauty always rises proud and strong. A stunning Haiku my dear friend, a great play on your words. Limited yet endless in thought....Maria hugs
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/3/2018 4:28:00 AM
Dear friend Maria, you know that it is my immense pleasure to read your works of art and heart and I always look forward to seeing you on my page with your gracious and heartfelt comments.My honour and tremendous pleasure.. keep shining! Stay safe and blessed always.
Date: 7/2/2018 2:26:00 PM
A very strong , well crafted and insightful Haiku my very talented friend! This is a powerful and deep insight into this dark world, humanity and the gifts of love and beauty within our souls and the great expanse of this wide, wide world. A fav... a rare, precious and glowing gem...
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Date: 7/3/2018 4:22:00 AM
I treasure your sincere praising of my humble Haiku! Thank you so much Robert for your kind words.. encouraging and rewarding! I'm so much grateful to your humbleness and generosity! Your visits are always cherished and valued.. My best regards. Stay blessed always.
Date: 7/1/2018 9:05:00 PM
Dearest Besma, your ardent reader sees your graceful beauty and elegant truth rising through your wondrous poem as eternal beauty will rise from the wrathful ashes of defeated and banished evil. The rising tide of the collective human spirit, on the side of light and good, will prevail over the dark and evil forces and together will rise in beauty refreshed, restored and reborn like a phoenix. A beautiful and powerful haiku born of your loving heart, shining soul, boundless devotion and strength of conviction. A superb poetic offering my dear friend. Warmest wishes and love always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/2/2018 1:20:00 PM
always an immense pleasure to read your beauties and comments dearest Susan. My love and hugs. Stay safe and blessed always.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 7/2/2018 1:19:00 PM
A precious reward is your presence on my page! A tremendous pleasure to greet you! Another priceless reward is your gracious praise! You outshine my very write with your generous and exquisite feedback! A heart of a poetess the core of which is a gem of rarity and beauty.. I'm not flattering you.. these are some of the feelings I was able to put into words..
Date: 6/28/2018 9:22:00 AM
Interesting perspective in you haiku...
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/28/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Silent One for reading and appreciating my write. My pleasure! Stay blessed.
Date: 6/28/2018 8:47:00 AM
And how beautiful that rising is!
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Date: 6/28/2018 1:39:00 PM
Nice to see you on my page dear Kim! My honour and pleasure! Thank you so much for your visit and uplifting feedback. Stay safe and blessed.
Date: 6/28/2018 8:00:00 AM
Stunning Haiku dear, Besma!
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/28/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Demetrios! Your praising comment means a lot to me.. Stay blessed always.
Date: 6/28/2018 5:30:00 AM
Also enjoyed your Haiku!
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/28/2018 1:25:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed my write Lyric Man.. Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. Stay blessed.
Date: 6/27/2018 4:52:00 PM
Let beauty rise, as evil retreats. May your words reverberate, Besma.
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Date: 6/28/2018 4:44:00 AM
Always a great pleasure to greet you on my page.. your feedbacks are lovely and of great value! Thank you so much dear Vijay. Stay safe and blessed.
Date: 6/27/2018 1:02:00 PM
Lovely hauku Besma, one day the good people on earth will rise and evil will fade away.We all pray fir that day to come. Tom
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/27/2018 1:07:00 PM
That's our call, plight and prayers for Beauty to prevail! Thank you so much Tom for honouring me with your visit and precious feedback. Stay blessed.

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