risen and redeemed

despite diligence of virtue’s outreach 
vice lurks adamant seeking a weak breach 

sweet talking as it beckons with a grin 
spirals down spinning slow into a sin 

my path did once veer off the righteous cause 
sank steady in quick sand of sinful jaws

my muddled mindset lured into abyss 
basking in toxic air of faux pas bliss 

upon hitting the grimy gloomy pit 
at the very bottom I saw to it 

I learnt to spurn the taste of tempting trait 
the promised land of vice deceitful bait
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