Rise and Shine

Islet is cold.
Iris is not.
	The moon is frozen.	
        The sun is hot.
The morning has come 
        and it’s time to get up.
Rise and shine my people! 
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Sponsor	Andrea Dietrich
Contest Name	The Great ITTY BITTY Poetry Contest 
Date of Entry.     03/30/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 28, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Verlena, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Austin Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Cute one, dear Andrea. Congrats, daver
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 8:20 AM
This is a fun and lovely poem..congratulations on your win...
Walker  Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Thanks Donna for your supportive remark... Verlena
Mehta Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, verlena
Walker  Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
Merryman Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 9:12 PM
Nice write, Verlena! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Walker  Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Thanks Kim for your support... Verlena
A  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 9:25 PM
lovely win.... SKAT
Walker  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 11:29 PM
thanks skat... verlena
A   Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 5:47 PM
VERLENA, Congratulations, awesome VERSE! xox ~LINDA
Walker  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Thanks Linda... Verlena
Torres Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 1:00 PM
wow!!! ..this is a very positive thoughts.. a good food for soul, Verlena.. Congratulations on your fine win dear!!! :o))
Walker  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Thanks Aiyah... Verlena
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 12:53 AM
your poem is very unique. I even looked up Islet and Iris to see what they could mean other than names. I found a rock band on youtube. haha. Anyway, I thought the ending was pretty cool. A surprise kind of poem. Congrats in my contest.
Walker  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 12:58 AM
Thanks Andrea... Verlena
Rogers Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 10:51 AM
...especially people w/o pictures or profiles!
Walker  Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Thanks... Advice adhered! Verlena
Rogers Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 10:50 AM
VSW, be careful about people trying to contact you through their e-mail, there are a huge amount of scammers who try to take advantage of good hearts and kind souls!..."A Word To The Wise"! xoxoxo//Sinclair
Walker  Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Listen... Hear... I accept your wise advice to be true. Thanks Robert for caring about you and me... Verlena
Rogers Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Interesting little write, I like it! xoxoxo//Sinclair
Walker  Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Had to give a jest response... Verlena
Johnson Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Give me a minute, let me please hit the snooze. You see I'z a bad boy last night with the booze. So please close the curtain, for I am quite certain. If you persist at this game, we'll both lose. :):):) HA HA HA :):) Peace. Have a great day Verlena. Smiley face. So cliche! :)
Walker  Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 4:27 PM
So good to know Robert has soul and a lively flow. Thanks a heap Bro... Verlena - Dark Sunshine
Hamilton Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 4:36 AM
short and to the point lovely hugs
Walker  Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Thanks a heap Shadow... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 6:26 AM
I am rising, not so sure about the shining part *lol*
Walker  Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:55 AM
One is better than none Richard. Thanks for the thumb up... Verlena
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 9:01 PM
oh , I like this one!! Short and sweet!
Walker  Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:19 PM
Thanks Andrea... Verlena
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