Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Rise and Fall

RISE
iNtEnSiTy Of BeAtS, trapping hailstorm in landlocked gorge.
nose flARes as I procure brisk air, balloon deflates at dread’s
FALL

4/14/2020
Let the Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas
Syllables: 1/14/14/1

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Jc Hawkens April 18, 2020 at 8:16 AM Congratulations Kim, I love how wrote this. Stunning imagery as well. Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2020 at 6:48 PM I greatly appreciate that JC!

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2020 at 6:05 PM I really like the way you showed the fall of hail with the short/long letters together. Clever! Kim Rodrigues April 16, 2020 at 8:14 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Jenish Somadas April 16, 2020 at 1:49 AM Congrats on your placement.. I'm honored to have your entry Kim.. Kim Rodrigues April 16, 2020 at 8:12 PM Thank you, Jenish! All about getting through this covid-19. <3 Kim

Howard Kerr April 15, 2020 at 2:19 PM Well done, Kim. A superb contest entry. Imaginative. Howard Kim Rodrigues April 15, 2020 at 2:22 PM Thank you, Howard!

JC Brul April 15, 2020 at 5:08 AM Another poem that is uniquely yours dear poet Kim. Happy to find this gem. Kim Rodrigues April 15, 2020 at 8:18 AM Thank you, sweet poet!

Pashang Salehi April 14, 2020 at 1:18 PM very interesting... nicely done. Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2020 at 1:22 PM Thank you, Pashang!

Probir Gupta April 14, 2020 at 12:10 PM Lovely rise and fall ... Kim Rodrigues April 14, 2020 at 1:22 PM Thank you, Probir!