Rise Above

Imagine the people!
What had they done?
With sadness or depression,
Once someone’s son,
So innocent the child,
Now sadness of eye,
Did life deal them that hand?
Then left in the sand?
Just like a card,
Fallen or starved,
Who let them down?
Backed into the wall,
No hope to recall,
Who could help rise above?
Where was the love?
When life’s in the grave?
Who could’ve saved?
Who are the brave?
Can we hold out our hand?
Can we really understand?
What if it’s you? 
Or the person you knew,
What would you do?
Could you raise them above?
Hold out your love.

14/06/2016
For contest Becca Teagan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 9, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Nicely done Wendy. I like a poem that has a message and this has a good one. I like the question, "What Would You Do". That's the important thing. Too many people "feel sorry" for the down trodden but don't want to get involved. Good job. God Bless, JB
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July 9, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Thank you Judy fo reading my poem x
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June 25, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Hi Wendy, I love your poem.. it was really hard to make a decision about placing winners, but yours is really good... thank you for entering the contest!
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June 27, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Thank you Becca that's very kind of you x I just really love writing poems x I get great joy from them and I love soup x
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June 20, 2016 at 4:02 PM
I love the way you ended this one, Wendy. HOld out your love!!
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July 9, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Andrea x very kind of you x
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June 20, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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July 9, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Thank you BL x
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June 16, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Especially during times of trouble, we reflect on what led us where and how we got there. Hold out your love, that is the driving force behind us all, without that there is sure to be collapse. hugs x
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June 16, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Casarah x
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