Ripples of Pain

I sit in sadness,
wondering why i feel
like all my wounds
inside me won't heal
the pain is like water
the ripples never stop
they crash against my soul
beating at the barriers till
they flow over the top
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:49 PM
really good write thank you duncan
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Sad write that is greatly interspersed with metaphoric language. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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