Notes About The Poem

08/07/25

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Contest by  Brian Strand 

ripples hiku

 ^  little ^ brittle  ^
                                                            ^
  ~~~ ripples~~~~~ dance <.  ^        ^  >

     <  >  <  > • •  • propagate slow •  ° •  °   • ° •  •

 • •   to fade away .  .  .  .  -  -
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Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 7:35 AM
I really like how the poem’s shape and words create that gentle, fragile vibe—like ripples fading away slowly. It’s simple but super effective. Nice touch!
Fleming Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 7:41 AM
Nicely done, Anisha. :) john
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