Mohan Chutani Poet Haiku

Ripples

From centre to edge
                                           My strength weakens in ripples;
                                                    To become tranquil


Haiku, 5/7/5
26.6.2014

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Poet Destroyer A July 10, 2014 at 11:28 AM Love the haiku...PD

Debbie Guzzi June 30, 2014 at 3:00 PM if this is about man you can label it senryu and not need to follow so many of the rules of haiku. ;) Light & Love Mohan Chutani June 30, 2014 at 7:57 PM Debbie, You are right. It can come under both categories as it can apply to both human feelings and nature's phenomenon. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2014 at 9:48 PM I like this. Weakening into tranquility! Mohan Chutani June 30, 2014 at 7:58 PM Andrea, thanks for the like. Mohan

Verlena S. Walker June 27, 2014 at 9:21 PM Lovely Mohan... Enjoyed... Verlena Mohan Chutani June 30, 2014 at 7:59 PM Thanks Verlena for enjoying it. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta June 26, 2014 at 8:04 PM Very deep thoughtful expression Mohan Chutani June 26, 2014 at 8:11 PM Dr. Ram, thanks for understanding what lies beneath the surface. I feel encouraged by your visits always. Mohan