Ripples

From centre to edge My strength weakens in ripples; To become tranquil Haiku, 5/7/5 26.6.2014

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Date: 7/10/2014 11:28:00 AM

Love the haiku...PD

Date: 6/30/2014 3:00:00 PM

if this is about man you can label it senryu and not need to follow so many of the rules of haiku. ;) Light & Love

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:57:00 PM

Debbie, You are right. It can come under both categories as it can apply to both human feelings and nature's phenomenon. Mohan

Date: 6/27/2014 9:48:00 PM

I like this. Weakening into tranquility!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:58:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the like. Mohan

Date: 6/27/2014 9:21:00 PM

Lovely Mohan... Enjoyed... Verlena

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:59:00 PM

Thanks Verlena for enjoying it. Mohan

Date: 6/26/2014 8:04:00 PM

Very deep thoughtful expression

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/26/2014 8:11:00 PM

Dr. Ram, thanks for understanding what lies beneath the surface. I feel encouraged by your visits always. Mohan