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The winds gentle breath Is visible on the lake Racing toward the shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2010 7:53:00 AM
Love the imagery, Larry! A "refreshing" Haiku. This has transported me to a place I'd love to be on this hot 70 degrees a.m.! Peace, love, audrey
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:02:00 PM
Lovely image of the "gentle breath" on the lake, Larry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:08:00 PM
Pleasent picture. Nicely written. Ralph
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