Notes About The Poem
Issa Kobayashi Inspired Poetry Poetry Contest - Haiku form
Sponsored by : Sotto Poet
Date: 11-07-2026

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you cry when you come
make others cry when you leave
try to laugh meanwhile

air in starts the life
air out takes away the  life
life’s an air bubble

rain sustains the life
heavy rain perturbs the life
imbalance in vain

Place: 2 nd
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Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. I like the descriptiveness and creativeness of it. Sara K.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments
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