Ripples

A magical pond where stones breed ripples of pain - ah, my heartless mind.
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November 22, 2025 at 10:24 PM
This is beautiful Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:42 PM
I loved this Haiku.. But not so famous.. Thank you for liking it as well, Dr..
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November 14, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Lovely use of metaphor, Jenish, as pain ripples from stones being tossed into the pond of your heart. If this is for a contest, best wishes! Blessings!
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November 15, 2025 at 9:07 PM
I didn’t write it for any contest—I just liked it and felt like sharing. It makes me happy that you liked it as well, Sam..
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