Ripples

Under the sufrace
a Fall stream elk hair caddis erupts
Fish leaps, ripples again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fisher Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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November 22, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shawn. Love,Carol
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December 6, 2009 at 3:24 PM
Love this one for the descriptiveness. I don't know what a elk hair caddis is but I can just see the rest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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September 8, 2009 at 1:19 AM
Nice use of imagery...Raul
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