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Ripples

Under the sufrace a Fall stream elk hair caddis erupts Fish leaps, ripples again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/22/2010 11:43:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shawn. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2009 3:24:00 PM
Love this one for the descriptiveness. I don't know what a elk hair caddis is but I can just see the rest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:19:00 AM
Nice use of imagery...Raul
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