Rippled Notes

quietly, I sail,
 enraptured in rhapsody,
 waves,  ripple softly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Michaels Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 5:11 AM
Very nice; captures the scene perfectly!
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 6:51 PM
I really like the feel of this one!!
Onclaud Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:06 PM
splendid 'ku from you, joseph... huggs
Allison Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 12:51 PM
delightful haiku!:-) hugs Jan xx
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