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10/13/25

Illisku : Illustrated haiku Challenge 2

Second Place

Contest by JCB Brul 

ripple illisku

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   > r~i~ p~p~l ~e.  ~             ^  n          i                                                        
                                ~  d  ~a         ^  c  ^  n  ^  g                                 f~l~o~a
                                                                              ^.                        ^               ^              l ^ e~a~f……
                                                                                     c                i~n~g              t           ^     
                                                                                        ^             ^                        ^.     ^
                                                                                          r~a~d~l                              i~n~g       
                                                                                                           

          



                                                                                       .  .      
           one ripple 
          dancing cradling~
          floating leaf…
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Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:59 PM
Interesting how your picture reversed two of the lines. Big congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 10:11 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Anisha :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Cool!
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