Sotto Poet Poet Villanelle

Ripple Blaze

Written: February 26, 2024
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Whilst an ivory sky, my mast ignite.
As tidal waves flicker in sparks that gleam.
Igneous scarlet pyres still blazing night.

The amber sparks hover in swooping sight.
Amid thunder, boisterous shivers scream.
Whilst an ivory sky, my mast ignite.

The limestone chunks resemble carved calcite.
With furnace flames in phosphorous agleam.
Igneous scarlet pyres still blazing night.

As I gaze upward, pitch and haze relight.
Steadfast, I plunge where evil spirits teem
Whilst an ivory sky, my mast ignite.

Rancid stench of the city stinks of blight.
Above lagoons, as muddy smog or steam.
Igneous scarlet pyres still blazing night.

A phoenix amidst the fire, set alight.
overhauled from ashen sidle, wings' dream
Whilst an ivory sky, my mast ignite.
Igneous scarlet pyres still blazing night.

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Howard Kerr February 28, 2024 at 5:11 AM Dear Sotto Poet, This exquisite portrayal of your subject matter compels admiration of the deepest kind. A rapturous torrent of incendiary images and poignant sweep engulfs the mind. You transport the reader on a carrier wave of creativity. “The Amber sparks hover in swooping sight,” and “igneous scarlet pyres still blazing night” among the many glowing jewels Heartfelt thanks for your insights on my recent post Howard

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2024 at 11:04 AM Creative work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Krishnanand Guptar February 27, 2024 at 8:28 AM Another of your masterly poetic feat, with such a rich diction, a flowing rhythm and natural rhymes. Your poems serve as models emanating from a golden pen. Wish you happy write.

Vijay Pandit February 27, 2024 at 6:54 AM Splendid images, my friend. Your descriptions adorn your theme and this difficult to execute form. Well done, as always, Lasaad.

Aurore Severo February 26, 2024 at 9:25 PM Your poetry is like a dance, always a pleasure to read, xoxo peace and love.

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 26, 2024 at 4:11 PM Sotto, Your poem is a captivating blend of vivid imagery and symbolic depth. It creates a striking contrast, setting the stage for a scene of both beauty and turmoil. The repeated line "Whilst an ivory sky, my mast ignite" acts as a powerful anchor, drawing the reader back to the central image and its transformation throughout the poem. It hints at both struggle and resilience, like a ship braving a fiery storm. The final lines offer a powerful message of hope and transformation. The imagery of the phoenix rising from the ashes beautifully aligns with the poem's themes of facing challenges and emerging stronger. This is ann evocative and thought-provoking piece! - Blessings, Daniel

Hilda Greenhough February 26, 2024 at 3:37 PM A fascinating poem. I can see the blaze. As always, I enjoyed this read.

Paula Goldsmith February 26, 2024 at 10:57 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Ripple Blaze" write. Have a blessed day writing away more wonderful writes.......................