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Ripped Apart By Gravity

I am holding nothing now, it weighs me down like a spoonful of neutron star. Degeneracy Pressure holds me still, holds me close. You were once my volume, your leaving has me as mass. Superheavy, we are subdued by Pauli Exclusion Principle. I envy event horizons, the electrons of emotional collapse. This Pressure holds me up and I shine on alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/24/2015 5:29:00 PM
Another fascinating piece from your talented pen... I must confess I had to look up the 'Pauli Exclusion Principle' but afterwards I had it licked! Well done Gary! Seasons' Greetings! Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/24/2015 6:44:00 PM
You too my friend! Keith
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 12/24/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Keith, you are very kind. Have a wonderful Christmas my friend! Gary
Date: 12/22/2015 8:21:00 PM
Powerful..
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 12/23/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words and for taking the time to reply?

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