Ripening Corn

ripening corn
swaying in the breeze 
hula hula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Allison Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 7:34 AM
fabulous non traditional haiku I especially love the hula hula line:-) hugs jan xx
Rees Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Many thanks Jan. good to hear from you again
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