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Ripe Mangos

Ripe Mangos
overripe mangos falling from a pregnant tree- worms ready for feast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/28/2017 8:28:00 PM
Dear Pandita, your imagery is ripe with textured luscious beauty and the cycle of life is beautifully expressed in your vivid Haiku. A fantastic write my lovely friend. Warmest wishes to you always.. Hugs.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/29/2017 3:25:00 PM
I am so appreciative of your wonderful support of my works, my dear Susan! Thanks a million for your always gracious feedback! Pandita
Date: 8/13/2015 1:32:00 PM
After several attempts managed to find a poem of yours that I have not read before:) ~ Love the imagery ~ pity many of those fruit will go to waste (or will they?!) All the best Pandita. // paul
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Date: 8/15/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Paul for ever supporting me. Unfortunately, I am not a very prolific writer. Try as I may, I am very slow putting out new pieces. But I promise to try harder:-). Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 5/1/2015 8:01:00 AM
wow! nicely written, specially the word ''pregnant tree'' is very touching.
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Date: 5/1/2015 8:06:00 PM
Shonima, I am so appreciative of your wonderful support of my works! Thanks a million! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 10:40:00 PM
I am a mango lover and just can't get enough of ripe mangoes! Well done! kika
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:35:00 PM
Big, juicy, sweet mangoes - oh no, I am drooling again:-) Thank you, Kika!
Date: 6/2/2014 3:00:00 PM
Black and red the best sticky fruit laying on ground await consumption.
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Date: 6/2/2014 4:21:00 PM
Bravo - that reminds me of a mamey which is a delicious tropical fruit that I love - brown on the outside, reddish inside and black seed!

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