Ripe Mangos

Ripe Mangos
overripe mangos falling from a pregnant tree- worms ready for feast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ashley Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Dear Pandita, your imagery is ripe with textured luscious beauty and the cycle of life is beautifully expressed in your vivid Haiku. A fantastic write my lovely friend. Warmest wishes to you always.. Hugs.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:25 PM
I am so appreciative of your wonderful support of my works, my dear Susan! Thanks a million for your always gracious feedback! Pandita
Callus Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:32 PM
After several attempts managed to find a poem of yours that I have not read before:) ~ Love the imagery ~ pity many of those fruit will go to waste (or will they?!) All the best Pandita. // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thank you so much dear Paul for ever supporting me. Unfortunately, I am not a very prolific writer. Try as I may, I am very slow putting out new pieces. But I promise to try harder:-). Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Burman Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:01 AM
wow! nicely written, specially the word ''pregnant tree'' is very touching.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Shonima, I am so appreciative of your wonderful support of my works! Thanks a million! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:40 PM
I am a mango lover and just can't get enough of ripe mangoes! Well done! kika
Sietesantos Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:35 PM
Big, juicy, sweet mangoes - oh no, I am drooling again:-) Thank you, Kika!
Tidd Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 3:00 PM
Black and red the best sticky fruit laying on ground await consumption.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Bravo - that reminds me of a mamey which is a delicious tropical fruit that I love - brown on the outside, reddish inside and black seed!
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