Rip Apart My Heart

You savaged my heart apart with such little care of the furry building inside me, 
But now u start to care, only now that I’ve stared to release the storm inside me,
 The storm you no will ruin your life, 

So once again you smile that angelic smile and say you’re sorry,
 Normally that would work, 
And you know it would, 
But not this time baby,
 no never again,

 So you can stand there and smile all you want and plead all you want,
 But it won’t save you this time, 

This time was the last time.

 Now you look a little drained of colour,
 now that you've realized that this was the last time you will break my heart, 
Now I stand and watch you plead and bleed,
 Well keep pleading baby not that it will do you any good, 

The bible says do unto other as you expect they should do unto you, 
So what does this mean baby you wanted this?!? 
Well just remember you broke my heart countless times and I’ve bounced back,
 I’ve broken your heart this one time and it has stopped,
 I think we both know who the stronger one out of us two is now don’t we?!?!?! 
Night, night Baby 
See you soon xx

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/6/2010 11:05:00 PM
Powerful as ever......... Love Roger x
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Date: 5/24/2010 5:18:00 PM
STRONGLY WRITTEN, WELL DONE
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