Ringing True

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I wrote this with my sister and her husband

A moon smiling shines one golden glow
Holds my attention from far below

Ring around a rose her pearly white face 
Brings to mind a love one's embrace

Inside dreaming Heaven's opens door
keys the lips kissing explore

Faraway treasure star falling wishes grace 
Exploding emotions increases the heart's pace

Winking goodnight sweet angel holds 
Forever and always until the bells toll


Co.written couplets by Liam Mc Daid +Seamus and Maria Mc Laughlin

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 8:45:00 AM

What a wonderful family colab. If not for family then what? I have to add this to my favs love the poem love that it was a family effort.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2015 12:30:00 PM

- This is sweet lines, beautifully written by you and your friends - My last poem called: "A Blessed Easter", hope you will enjoy it :) - I wish you a lovely day, my friend Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/1/2015 8:15:00 AM

Hi Liam!Another very beautiful dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend and this time in collaboration with Seamus,and Maria.Hi Seamus and Maria!Great collaboration!The whole piece is so romantic and beautiful.Just awesome!A very big 7+++to each of you!A fav!A very sweet,romantic,beautiful,passionate love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Enjoyed it!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love and hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2015 2:57:00 AM

Oh Liam this is so so romantic - incredible imagery - I especially love the third couplet!!! congrats to you all - get them posting here if they aren't already!!!! hugs Jan xx 7 xx