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Ring Leader

Personally I don't like the way he gets up Every morn sqawking, strutting his stuff around, don't like, yup Ring leader in the morn with his self-centeredness His behavior exudes narcism and great abrasivesness His neck stretched, chest extended, muslces flexed ready This Rhode Island Red crows from dawn 'til sun up and steady Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper Contest: Personifying Science Written: 09-26-13 A form of Poulter's Measure Written in rhyming couplets

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/26/2013 2:49:00 PM

Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 10/24/2013 10:56:00 AM

I don't like it either, this crow; but I love the poem!

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:57:00 PM

Sara, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:46:00 PM

Sara, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 5:08:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Sara

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/17/2013 10:45:00 PM

Thanks so much for this wonderful imagery of a crow and how science could be seen that way. I love the voice that comes through in this. However, the contest rules called for the selection of the personification form. Also, I think you have the skill to dig a little deeper. Enjoyed your work, thanks so much for entering my contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2013 6:07:00 PM

Sara. Stunning words intriguing expressive couplets! Dynamic work! Thank you......LINDA

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/26/2013 5:54:00 PM

This is a talented display of what a personification looks like my friend! You did excellently with this delightful poem Sara! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!