Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

Ring Leader

Personally I don't like the way he gets up 
Every morn sqawking, strutting his stuff around, don't like, yup

Ring leader in the morn with his self-centeredness
His behavior exudes narcism and great abrasivesness

His neck stretched, chest extended, muslces flexed ready
This Rhode Island Red crows from dawn 'til sun up and steady

  

Sponsor: Sheri Fresonke Harper
Contest: Personifying Science
Written: 09-26-13

A form of Poulter's Measure 
Written in rhyming couplets

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Debbie Guzzi October 26, 2013 at 2:49 PM Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love

Gerald Kithinji October 24, 2013 at 10:56 AM I don't like it either, this crow; but I love the poem!

Skat A October 23, 2013 at 8:57 PM Sara, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2013 at 10:46 PM Sara, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta October 18, 2013 at 5:08 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Sara

Sheri Fresonke Harper October 17, 2013 at 10:45 PM Thanks so much for this wonderful imagery of a crow and how science could be seen that way. I love the voice that comes through in this. However, the contest rules called for the selection of the personification form. Also, I think you have the skill to dig a little deeper. Enjoyed your work, thanks so much for entering my contest.

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2013 at 6:07 PM Sara. Stunning words intriguing expressive couplets! Dynamic work! Thank you......LINDA

Russell Sivey September 26, 2013 at 5:54 PM This is a talented display of what a personification looks like my friend! You did excellently with this delightful poem Sara! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!