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Right Or Wrong

Right or Wrong? If I were right? Yet you felt Wrong Would it mean you didn't belong? Could I ever be right? If I judged you wrong? Would it mean I didn't belong? Did God make me right? Or did He make you wrong? If so where would God belong? If I were an expressions of light? You a magnificent expressions of night? Where would that illusive wrong or right belong? Diana Dalton 1 April 2008

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 9:06:00 PM

Diana, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

Jerry Najera

Date: 5/30/2013 7:20:00 PM

That is a really great poem! I agree with sir Anthony Nutter down there. Only god can speak towards the good or bad. Fantastic job!

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/25/2012 9:41:00 AM

Imaginative write makes one think. Maybe we should just leave the judging up to God

Diana Dalton
Date: 9/25/2012 11:00:00 AM

wow thanks You got it, great!

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/9/2012 8:17:00 AM

wonderful lines!

Diana Dalton
Date: 9/10/2012 6:43:00 PM

Thank you very much for you kind words!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/23/2012 3:28:00 PM

many questions here, with a thought provoking poem,

Diana Dalton
Date: 9/10/2012 6:46:00 PM

Thank you harry!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:10:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Diana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Diana Dalton
Date: 8/16/2012 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Carol!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2012 10:52:00 AM

Diana, it's so great to see you posting here. I enjoyed reading this. I enjoyed the way you made this about right and wrong. yes, answers are too often elusive!!

Diana Dalton
Date: 8/12/2012 11:03:00 AM

Thank you. I have been trying to find my way around the soup

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2012 5:45:00 AM

Well written Diana - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diana Dalton
Date: 8/12/2012 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Anne!

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 5:36:00 AM

Diana now there is a question! I like this...David

Diana Dalton
Date: 8/12/2012 8:51:00 AM

and the Answer?