Right, Not Quite
RIGHT? NOT QUITE.
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CAN YOU SEE! can you see?
what's not there don't show easily
the black and white are not quite write
the path it lies in questions, whys?
the answer pries your eyes, SURPRISE!
if your inclined you can find my mind
but i can't
away you go to forget you know
the worlds winds blow in words that glow
extend, suspend, up-end a trend, OFFEND!
can you see? CAN YOU SEE!
it wasn't done intentionally?
the whitest light is not quite right
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