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Right Next To Me

Revealing the sweet way you make me feel unique Intrigued that compassion and empathy I seek Grazing me with warmhearted affection and love Heart racing in gratitude to the Lord above Tapering off deep loss; now words of hope I speak Never needing anything but you in my life Everyday I’m very grateful that I am your wife XOXO I love you, like stardust we glow Togetherness we shall spread and faith we shall sow To be honest I know not why you adore me so Outstanding caresses in the bed you bestow Mesmerized by your smile; completeness I do see Each moment means the most when you’re right next to me rhyme acrostic 12 syllables in each line ACROSTICALLY I STAND TALL Poetry Contest August 3, 2019 1st place

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Date: 8/3/2019 2:50:00 PM
Lu Loo, this is a fantastic acrostic! A lovely tribute to your husband and it rhymes! Great work! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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