Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Right Here Wating For You

The smile in your eyes fills my heart
Though distance does keep us apart
Your words mean the world to me
I read what others can’t see

I know when I’m feeling blue
I just have to think of you
Champagne bubbles burst in my heart
Right on target like a swift flying dart

I miss you; your words are sublime
Come back and see me some time

Jan Allison
3rd August 2014

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Steve Harris August 6, 2014 at 9:44 AM Ah! The comfort of a close friend. Beautifully done! Jan Allison August 6, 2014 at 9:48 AM Thanks so much Steve.. sadly it has fallen on deaf ears I fear:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Ana Espinola Collins August 3, 2014 at 8:54 AM Sweet poem Jan with a nice flow...I enjoyed it very much :) Ana Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 8:56 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Ana:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 8:46 AM - Me ................. I'm here! :)))) - Sweet poems, Jan !!!! - Miss you too ..... visit me :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 8:56 AM Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment Anne Lise and i love the new avatar it is stunning:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 3, 2014 at 8:44 AM How beautiful Jan...the beginning reminds me of the Allison Krauss song "When You Say Nothing At All" have a listen it is wonderful....hugs Tim Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 9:25 AM I saw him twice when we lived on the UK mainland once as a support act and again in his own right - stunning! Tim Smith August 3, 2014 at 8:58 AM I saw a concert of Richard Marx here in Chicago...fabulous Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 8:55 AM I have just listened to it Tim - I adore that song - the version I have is by Ronan Keating:-) The title comes from a song by Richard Marx. I love listening to music for inspiration. Hugs as ever Jan xxx "