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Right Here Wating For You

The smile in your eyes fills my heart Though distance does keep us apart Your words mean the world to me I read what others can’t see I know when I’m feeling blue I just have to think of you Champagne bubbles burst in my heart Right on target like a swift flying dart I miss you; your words are sublime Come back and see me some time Jan Allison 3rd August 2014

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Steve Harris

Date: 8/6/2014 9:44:00 AM

Ah! The comfort of a close friend. Beautifully done!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Steve.. sadly it has fallen on deaf ears I fear:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 8/3/2014 8:54:00 AM

Sweet poem Jan with a nice flow...I enjoyed it very much :) Ana

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Ana:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2014 8:46:00 AM

- Me ................. I'm here! :)))) - Sweet poems, Jan !!!! - Miss you too ..... visit me :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment Anne Lise and i love the new avatar it is stunning:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2014 8:44:00 AM

How beautiful Jan...the beginning reminds me of the Allison Krauss song "When You Say Nothing At All" have a listen it is wonderful....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 9:25:00 AM

I saw him twice when we lived on the UK mainland once as a support act and again in his own right - stunning!

Tim Smith
Date: 8/3/2014 8:58:00 AM

I saw a concert of Richard Marx here in Chicago...fabulous

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 8:55:00 AM

I have just listened to it Tim - I adore that song - the version I have is by Ronan Keating:-) The title comes from a song by Richard Marx. I love listening to music for inspiration. Hugs as ever Jan xxx "