Right Around 10:25

I don't know who your words are for 
Is it wrong to think they were written for me? 
I don't know where you stand right now 
But I hope you're feeling free 

It was freedom that you wanted 
Well, isn't that right? 
You wanted to be on your own? 
Unbound with the freedom of flight. 

So what should I think now? 
Is there still something there? 
Or should I simply forget? 
I wish you knew how much I still care. 

I miss you daily 
Sometimes for days I do not rest 
It's always a pleasure, sir 
We truely were the best 

But dwelling in the past 
Is something I simply must not do 
If by chance your words were for me, 
Of course. I forgive you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:16 AM
well written!
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September 9, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Lauren. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 1:28 PM
The eternal conflict, the eternal guilt of truth, the eternal giving of this to poetry ... welcome to the soup. Nice work
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September 9, 2010 at 10:15 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lauren. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... hope your stay here is a long one.. this site offers many contests..check them out and enter..and good luck..with luv..
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