Right?

Rebel/ i consider myself out the ordinary level
sound silly?/ its just the way my words tend to treble

im the beggining/ you the end
im coming forward/ all dressed in red

revolution/ not an evolution
soldiers in motion/ whats the commotion?

i fight for my right/ liberty for my people
you treat me unequal/ i show you our feature

strong and bold/ can be reasonable but also cold
soldiers down to fight/ but also want to make it right

i was born in a country of war/ Nicaragua is what i mourn
raised in this beautiful country i now call home/ united states, is where i have my home

here im free/ but im calling out racist wanabee friendlys
i dont see color/ i wanna see humanity getting friendly

black, white, and brown/ together turning frowns upside down
evil grins/ making them turn right around

so lets unite and make our own world/ revolution is just an expression
we can use it for good/ or bad impressions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/10/2009 7:07:00 AM
awesome--charma
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Date: 8/9/2009 10:25:00 PM
here you go! definitely more than the other i read but same amount of strength which you should keep growing, also this a great rhyme poem.
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