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Riding the Wave

Met a surfer today riding the crime wave Ax-murderer that I am he went to a watery grave I got away scot-free, of course police deparment being defunded Chased me with a carousel horse Even I could outrun him

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/10/2021 8:38:00 PM

vivid imagery ~ a fun poem

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thanks, Line! :) gw

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/9/2021 7:08:00 AM

Gershon, Reminds me of Mack the Knife. 'Oh, the shark, babe, has such teeth, dear And it shows them pearly white' -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2021 8:51:00 PM

Bobby Darin agrees with you too! ~ Dick Clark, from the Ghost of American Bandstand

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/8/2021 7:33:00 PM

I'll bet that carousel horse couldn't catch the gingerbread man. Of course, that's good news for you. A fun poem, Gershon. :D

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2021 7:35:00 PM

Ha, ha! You are right, Evelyn. It is good for me, as the Gingerbread Man and I move at about the same snail's pace these days. Thanks, gw

Terry Flood

Date: 7/8/2021 3:42:00 PM

Police going round in circles again, huh? No wonder you’re still at large. Loved your poem... well I would, wouldn’t I? After all, you’ve got an axe. ;-) Terry

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2021 7:36:00 PM

Good thing that you axed me about that Terry. lol. ~ gw