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Riding the Lightning

The thunder splits the dark sky wide open In the streaks of lightning the clouds glow An angel falls from abode in high heaven Frozen fiery channels make a cradle below. In the desolate ground she searches in vain The face she fell for and brought the flower Broken heart held in hand she is uncertain How fallen angel goes back as lightning rider. August 6, 2017.

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Date: 8/25/2017 4:05:00 PM
I love this little energetic gem, Subimal - this is so wonderfully described! Congrats on your win! :-)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/26/2017 1:36:00 AM
Thank you, Greg for your appreciation which I value so much.
Date: 8/25/2017 12:51:00 PM
Congrats Subimal to win
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/26/2017 1:35:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha.
Date: 8/25/2017 6:49:00 AM
oh lightning rider, great imagery, thank you and congrats :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/25/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you , Laura for your appreciation.

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