riding in spring



riding spring's quiet road, two bulbuls overhead, raced with me.

( First in the Poetry Contest entitled"Spring Monoku" sponsored by JCB Brul )
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:14 PM
How cute this is! Congrats!
Singh Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 9:22 PM
Thank you
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 9:57 AM
charming ~
Singh Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 9:22 PM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:41 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Akham :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs
Singh Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 6:37 AM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:24 PM
Back with my congrats. A great win
Singh Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 10:02 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:40 AM
I don't know what bulbuls are, but it feels like having fun
Singh Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 7:20 PM
Thank you
Greenhough Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 6:07 AM
I can imagine how lovely that road must be. I enjoy reading about this faraway place.
Singh Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Perfect line. Best for a win.
Singh Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 3:27 AM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:43 PM
- A great one, Akham :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Singh Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:15 AM
Thank you
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