Riding Hurled Waves

riding your hurled waves

beneath a pure white of clouds--

I drown on  sand's swamp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Onclaud Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:38 PM
hi amelie, this is an emotive work!.. jope to read more of you.. thanks for passing by.. huggs
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 6:51 PM
beautiful but sad imagery great write:-) Hugs jan xx
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