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Riding

I like riding my bike on blue days........ but, I like riding in spring showers too.

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/6/2022 11:34:00 AM

Great one

James Inman

Date: 3/13/2018 7:56:00 PM

Lovely memories you've brought back for me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2017 8:31:00 PM

Very nice, Debbie. I have not ridden a bike in so long. I would just like to ride one at all!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/10/2017 11:06:00 AM

May be you paint this beautiful image...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/21/2017 2:43:00 AM

- My bike is parked in the garage .... I think it has been retired :))) - Lovely line, Debbie - Best wishes ... hope all is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/10/2017 5:21:00 AM

great image Debbie, great poem.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/5/2017 8:39:00 AM

Variety is always a good thing! Hope you are well.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/5/2017 4:32:00 AM

Oh yes so do I. I like the image this conjures up Debbie....Maria

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/25/2017 10:29:00 PM

Very beautiful! Imagery is awesome and I love the blue days and spring showers! A lovely comparison.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/21/2017 6:37:00 AM

Excellent. Fun write. Thanks for sharing it.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/17/2017 9:39:00 PM

i used to like riding on a bicycle - do not know if i still can. Riding in the rain sounds nice. Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/24/2017 4:53:00 PM

Indeed, any day is a fine day for some fun! ... I enjoyed this poem, Debbie. It put a smile on my face and brought back those good childhood memories... Nicely done!

Silent One

Date: 9/16/2017 4:05:00 PM

Nice one liner Debbie..

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/11/2017 4:44:00 AM

Beautiful one line Poem dear friend Debbie. Riding a bike is often as charming is joy ride as riding of horse in the morning hours. Your love for bike riding can be seen when you concluded it in the spring showers. Hope U are fine dear friend. l&bw........Ravindra K Kapoor

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/10/2017 7:02:00 AM

Lovely theme well depicted Debbie--blue days and spring showers--a joy!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2017 11:34:00 PM

This is certainly a fun write Debbie! It's been awhile since I've commented on your work! Sorry if I have missed you! This is a grandiose poem, one of excitement of riding in the rain, and in the blue sky! I surely loved reading this awesome piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!